ill be sincere. Didnt look at all of it, because it got a bit boring.
But i make clay animations too. And to anyone that doesnt, i tell you this took a shitton of work.
Sound: really good. Advice, add a bit of music but almost unhearable so there's not just a voice. Voices were good.
animation: Boring, not much of movement, but MAN it is fluid.
Story: boring. The video is not really interesting.
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Advice: More movement, more action, and keep the rest. Specially the natural movement.